Score: 7

"Grand Theft X-Mas 07"

submission: Grand Theft Grotto

date: May 9, 2008

Great game, thats all I've got to say.

Score: 4

"I thought you said you made high-quality videos???"

submission: Street Fighter Series pt2

date: May 8, 2008

I could have sworn you said you made high-quality videos in your bio, because this was far from it. You should be grateful for how high your score is, because most people frown upon sprite movies.

Okay, so heres my problems with it.

The animation is good, but its hard not to make good animation using Street Fighter sprites. And it seems that you didn't create a single frame of this on your own, next time put a bit more effort atleast in editing them... Maybe make your own SFX to spice things up too.

The sound effects were a nice touch, but it really only degraded the film after realizing that there were only 3 actual sounds used and they were just repeated over and over again. Next time please use more variation in sound effects, otherwise it gets rather annoying and repetitive.

The fighting was dull and the story was useless, it only hurt the overall effect. The fighting had nothing that stood out from the crowd and was perhaps less interesting than the fighting in an actual match of streetfighter. Next time try and make things faster paced and more fluid, and with less breaks for talking and useless pauses.

The text and story were horendous, try and improve on them next time. Maybe implement voice acting rather than text, or find a way to better include the text in the video as to keep the action going and to not bore the viewer.

Score: 3

"Yeah yeah yeah whatevah"

submission: Akuma v Twelve

date: May 8, 2008

It was just so-so, nothing too new or impressive here.
The animation was smooth, but thats not something hard to accomplish when using Street-Fighter sprites. And the fighting was good, although rather plain and uninventive. Next time try and make use of things that Street Fighter doesn't already have available, IE environments or added SFX or blood.
The fight was also extremely short, had only one round, and when Akuma killed Twelve it just fell in two exact halves right down the middle... Atleast try and do something creative with the death next time.

Score: 5

"Ya got me, hard."

submission: Picoe 2

date: May 8, 2008

Don't see how this got into the Pico Day 2008 collection, but I've been rickrolled...

Score: 1

"The infamous one word reviewit truly is remarkable"

submission: Big Blue Button 2

date: May 8, 2008

Tabkey.

Score: 4

"A bit iffy, mc... Mcjiffy?"

submission: Tenacious D - Friendship

date: May 8, 2008

Okay so you can draw pretty well, but you seem to lack the patience needed to animate. Nonetheless its pretty good looking, just too dull. The mouths were just moving not synced, and most animations were 2 frames rather than the 20+ they should have been to look good. You should try tweening, even though most artists look down upon it, it can really help raise the quality of a flash.
The flash needs a far improved menu to stand out, and it deserves an icon to show that its not just a movie in need of blamming.

Score: 5

"Unfinished, Unreviewed"

submission: Flash RPG Maker v0.1

date: May 7, 2008

Great Idea, theres a lot of people would love to play and make RPGs with this program. If you would just update it to feature Testing/playing and of course Saving it would become an instant Favorite for many and a true Newgrounds classic.

Score: 6

"Ehhh"

submission: Animation Challenge Wk4-6

date: May 5, 2008

The animations as a whole were kind of ehhh, sub-par. But there were a few that really stood above the rest. The menu and animation viewing was well done though, good job on the actionscripts.

The tutorial sections is a GREAT idea, but you really implemented it poorly. When changing from Previous to Next the audio begins to stack, make sure to turn off playing audio when clicking the buttons. Also the animation tutorials didn't really help in the least, you just told people to make frames in flash. Which when animating in flash is rather self-explanitory. Next time, or in an update, make sure to clearly state examples of how to animate and advice on doing it. Also include each frame of the animation so we can see the progression rather than just the original and animated versions.

Its cool that your still making these though. I've noticed that the artists keep getting better.

Score: 0

"Crapola Deluxxxx 2"

submission: escape THE ZONE 2

date: May 4, 2008

This game should be renamed; Crapola Deluxxxx 2. You didn't make a background button or anything so all you have to do is hit TAB to find the target. And besides that the game takes 0 skill to make and 0 skill to play. There is no challenge or real purpose.

Next time make sure to include untouchable objects or extra points or something to make the game more than CLICK THIS BUTTON FOR THE NEXT PAGE.

Score: 6

"Sounds Promising, If Ever Accomplished"

submission: Dungeons&Dragons- trailer

date: May 3, 2008

The animation was pathetic, as it was nearly nothing but tweening but the actual artwork was great. If you just put a few frames along with the tweens it would have put the trailer on a whole other level.
The storyline sounds good, although the names are a bit standard and not very unique. I don't know anything about D&D either btw XD.

Anyway, the only real problem I hear is the lack of finishing or even starting this series. I'd love to see some storylined flashes from you in the near future.